Kids photoshoot c&c please

Let me know what you think. We started these outside, but the weather did not agree with my plans, so we ended up inside in the studio. Ignore the frame in the first post, not my idea...

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I think the first one is a bit soft and oversaturated.

I like his overall pose in the second one.

My main concern with all three is that the subject is not making eye contact with the camera or looking at any other object that you can see in the photo. They just draw your eye right out of the frame.

first one is oversaturated and and looks to be over sharpened with the halo around the kids arm...

the hair in the third one on the girls nose is killing me

chaotichoax wrote in post #11257496
the hair in the third one on the girls nose is killing me

now that's all I can see... lol thanks... lol

agree! too much PP on #1 and the hair on #3 is fixable in Photoshop

Foot is cut off in #2
Agree with pp on #1
I like #3 except the hair down her nose (which can be photoshoped) and maybe a vertical crop would be better.