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JPepus

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Nov 11, 2010 10:21 | #1

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Mastineo

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Nov 11, 2010 10:32 | #2

Like the second one.
The first one is too dark (may be my uncalibrated monitor) to work out what the pose is and all the detail is lost between her arms. Reminds me of a spider!!

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Nov 11, 2010 10:40 | #3

Yeah, the first one gets lost in the shadows and could have done with some fill by way of a reflector or low powered flash of some sort. Cool mask though!

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Nov 11, 2010 10:54 | #4

Hmmm...well I made it dark on purpose trying to go for a scary feel (then lightened up her left eye and cleavage a little), but guess it didn't quite get the feel I was aiming for...let me see what else I can do with it... Thanks!

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Nov 11, 2010 11:22 | #5

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Ideas on what to do with it? I'm drawing a blank besides what I already tried (above) but just feel I HAVE to use this one.

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Nov 11, 2010 16:23 | #6

The mask reminds me of a japanese designer, Takuya Angel? Am I on the right track?

As for the darkening, I would stick with the first edit, but take out the vignetting and see if it is drowning like it was before?

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