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Nov 12, 2010 19:03 |  #1

I was driving through this neighborhood and I saw these white flowers and here you go and enjoy.


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Nov 12, 2010 19:27 |  #2

I think it can be improved with more depth of field. Many of the peddles are out of focus.


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Nov 12, 2010 19:49 |  #3

As was said, more DOF. Nice exposure though.


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Nov 12, 2010 20:01 |  #4

Good advice..I was going with only keeping a few of the flowers in focus. Im learning DOF and my lens and equipment are low end. Thanks for the comments.


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Nov 13, 2010 17:44 as a reply to  @ Quaz8r's post |  #5

More DOF by setting the aperture larger, plus it looks underexposed. Maybe add some fill flash and use it to get the aperture open more ;)


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Nov 13, 2010 22:34 |  #6

Disagree about the lighting. It looks like it was shot in the harshest light of mid-day.


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Nov 23, 2010 12:02 |  #7

Having only a few of the flowers in focus is a creative idea - in that case, focus on the flower that is closest to you so it is the sharpest, with the background ones a little more OOF. Also have that focused flower placed on a 3rd intersection of the grid (Rule of Thirds) in your framing.

Good exposure and a pretty little group of flowers.


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Nov 23, 2010 21:16 |  #8

Thanks for the input. I will use that as a guide.


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