20 years after winning a State Championship my Alma Mater has hopes of winning another.
Let me know what you think. Thanks.
Nov 13, 2010 22:34 | #1 20 years after winning a State Championship my Alma Mater has hopes of winning another. http://phlotography.smugmug.com/Nelson-Malave
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JY1972 Hatchling 3 posts Joined Nov 2010 Location: Toms River, NJ More info | Nov 14, 2010 00:43 | #2 Great shots! I will be attempting to shoot a football game on Monday afternoon. Hope to get a few like yours!
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nyy Senior Member 616 posts Joined May 2006 Location: New Jersey More info | Nov 14, 2010 00:49 | #3 This one is a great tackle shot. ![]() Well done. Though I hope his knee is ok. "I think Bigfoot is blurry, that's the problem. It's not the photographer's fault. Bigfoot is blurry. And that's extra scary to me, because there's a large, out-of-focus monster roaming the countryside." --Mitch Hedberg
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Ceyber Member 123 posts Joined Jun 2008 Location: Cold Lake Alberta More info | Nov 14, 2010 10:53 | #5 It may be my monitor, but these look underexposed.... 60D, 40D, 24-70L, 100-400L, 50 1.4
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Nov 14, 2010 11:48 | #6 they might be a little UE. It was sunny with lots of Shade. I went down 2/3, when i didn't a lot of the bright spots were blown out. Something I need to work on. http://phlotography.smugmug.com/Nelson-Malave
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namasste Cream of the Crop 6,911 posts Likes: 140 Joined Jul 2007 Location: NE Ohio More info | Nov 14, 2010 21:19 | #7 You probably don't want to hear this but if you are going to improve, you should consider my comments as an attempt to help. I'm not sure there's really a keeper in this series. Some of the issues are correctable, some not and some may be due to gear limitations (since I have no idea what glass you shot these with). They are underexposed, horizons are off in some, focus seems soft in others. Action is decent in a few but not really peak other than the hit and unfortunately on that one, your position didn't allow for the best image impact. Also backgrounds..you gotta pay attention to those as they can kill an otherwise good image. Composition could be fixed with some crops in most but is on the weak side. Scott Evans Photography
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Nov 14, 2010 21:45 | #8 I appreciate the feedback. I will continue to put in work. I do some of the stuff you mentioned but I will get out there and keep what you said in mind. http://phlotography.smugmug.com/Nelson-Malave
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