here are some different variations of the same image.
constructive criticism welcome!
matt99017d Member 187 posts Joined Nov 2010 Location: Medford OR More info | Nov 14, 2010 12:27 | #1 here are some different variations of the same image. 70-200 F4 L sold 10-22 sold
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neil_r Cream of the Proverbial Crop Landscape and Cityscape Photographer 2006 18,065 posts Likes: 10 Joined Jan 2003 Location: The middle of the UK More info | Nov 14, 2010 12:29 | #2 Selective colouring as a technique has limited appeal. Neil - © NHR Photography
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Fureinku Goldmember 1,339 posts Likes: 27 Joined May 2006 Location: DFW, TX More info | Nov 14, 2010 12:30 | #3 |
argyle Cream of the Crop 8,187 posts Likes: 24 Joined Apr 2007 Location: DFW, Texas More info | The original seems underexposed to me...I'd work on the exposure before getting overly concerned about the selective coloring (which I don't think fits the mood of the photo). I also agree about the limited appeal aspect... "Fat, drunk and stupid is no way to go through life, son". - Dean Wormer
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corkneyfonz Goldmember 2,477 posts Likes: 5 Joined Oct 2009 Location: United Kingdom More info | Nov 14, 2010 19:46 | #5 Agree that sc is rather passe these days but it kind of works here, my preference is the third version.
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egsr Junior Member 23 posts Joined Jul 2009 More info | Nov 15, 2010 10:56 | #6 i would remove the top two images as i feel they detract from the quality of the last image. the last one looks nice and im sure your happy with it.
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bdpaco Senior Member 696 posts Joined Aug 2009 More info | Nov 15, 2010 11:00 | #7 the last one looks the best, but the image seems to tilted down on the left and makes me feel off balance... My Blog
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gonzogolf dumb remark memorialized More info | Nov 15, 2010 11:01 | #8 In the last one you've created a nice SC image. Now Stop, and promise never to do it again. Reliance on parlor tricks like this just slow your growth as a photographer.
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egsr Junior Member 23 posts Joined Jul 2009 More info | Nov 15, 2010 11:02 | #9 /\ well said
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Titus213 Cream of the Crop More info | Nov 15, 2010 23:48 | #10 Nicely done selective color. Dave
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xcel730 Senior Member 603 posts Joined Dec 2009 Location: New York More info | Nov 16, 2010 13:36 | #11 Just a thought ... for the 3rd photo, maybe mute the color a little bit. You will still have your selective coloring, but it will not have as sharp as a contrast. ________
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andydunlop Member 123 posts Joined Sep 2010 Location: Scotland More info | Nov 16, 2010 13:38 | #12 IMO, selective colour appeals to the "masses", but not photographers (or ones with taste Andy Dunlop: Events & Publicity Manager / Tour Manager / DJ
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Albertonman Senior Member 419 posts Likes: 1 Joined Sep 2010 More info | Nov 16, 2010 13:43 | #13 Your image is tilted to the left, I agree with the top post who said that it makes him feel off balance, well it kinda makes me feel the same. I dont particularly like selective coloring, but this image seems to work, I agree with everyone, the last picture is nice, but I wouldnt have made the bridge so contrasty like the rest of the image as you are losing detail from the sides.
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SJPHoto Senior Member 487 posts Joined May 2007 Location: Huntington Beach, CA More info | Nov 17, 2010 01:42 | #14 a white dress is not the best thing to do selective coloring on.... it don't help "pop" anything. SJP WEBSITE
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will227457 Senior Member 261 posts Joined Aug 2009 More info | Nov 17, 2010 11:21 | #15 sky looks blown out and image looks soft, you have bigger fish to fry rather than worrying about selective coloring
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