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Took this on a bright sunny day with no clouds as you can tell. Let me know if the b/w works in this picture.
dynamic03 Senior Member 341 posts Joined Jan 2010 More info | Nov 15, 2010 13:08 | #1
Took this on a bright sunny day with no clouds as you can tell. Let me know if the b/w works in this picture. Canon 5D Mark II | 135mm L | 24-70mm L | 100mm f/2.8 macro | 50mm f/1.8
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ChuckingFluff Goldmember  1,391 posts Likes: 2 Joined Aug 2010 Location: Canada Eh! More info | Nov 15, 2010 13:35 | #2 I'm a fan of negative space if the subject matter is interesting and this one just does not do anything for me. Way too much negative space and the subject is just the tip of a building hiding in the corner. As far as the B&W goes this would look like a grey card hanging on the wall. Any more points of view with this building?
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Nov 15, 2010 13:42 | #3 ChuckingFluff wrote in post #11288661  I'm a fan of negative space if the subject matter is interesting and this one just does not do anything for me. Way too much negative space and the subject is just the tip of a building hiding in the corner. As far as the B&W goes this would look like a grey card hanging on the wall. Any more points of view with this building? The reason why I have the tip of this building because everything below this mark had construction boards covering the building. Canon 5D Mark II | 135mm L | 24-70mm L | 100mm f/2.8 macro | 50mm f/1.8
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ChuckingFluff Goldmember 1,391 posts Likes: 2 Joined Aug 2010 Location: Canada Eh! More info | Nov 15, 2010 14:31 | #4 It would be nice to see it once the construction is done, it looks like it will be an interesting building.
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ToddLambert I don't like titles  More info | Nov 15, 2010 14:38 | #5 Agreed, too much white space here. I'd crop down to the right corner, so that you keep the same aspect, but the church at least fills the right side of the composition.
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Nov 15, 2010 15:03 | #6 Todd Lambert wrote in post #11289046 Agreed, too much white space here. I'd crop down to the right corner, so that you keep the same aspect, but the church at least fills the right side of the composition. Nevertheless, I like what you're going for, just don't think this version is it.  I see what you mean, I guess my execution could have been better. Canon 5D Mark II | 135mm L | 24-70mm L | 100mm f/2.8 macro | 50mm f/1.8
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thetathink Member  194 posts Joined Aug 2010 More info | Nov 15, 2010 20:40 | #7 I like it for an ad. Put some clever little line of copy up there and your done.
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Fureinku Goldmember  1,339 posts Likes: 27 Joined May 2006 Location: DFW, TX More info | Nov 15, 2010 22:24 | #8 |
whydub Member 94 posts Likes: 1 Joined Sep 2010 More info | Nov 16, 2010 00:18 | #9 I think a tighter crop would make this look better. Also since it's with direct sunlight, looks like some details are lost on the clock. I think the negative space is fine, but it's just a tad too much.
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Anke "that rump shot is just adorable" UK SE Photographer of the Year 2009  30,454 posts Likes: 3 Joined Oct 2006 Location: Royal Tunbridge Wells, UK More info | Nov 16, 2010 00:20 | #10 I'm a big fan of negative space images and shoot them a lot, but I'm not sure this one is all it can be in black and white. Colour maybe?... Anke
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Nov 16, 2010 10:46 | #11 Anke wrote in post #11292362 I'm a big fan of negative space images and shoot them a lot, but I'm not sure this one is all it can be in black and white. Colour maybe?... I thought the b/w stood out more, I'll try to upload the color one. Canon 5D Mark II | 135mm L | 24-70mm L | 100mm f/2.8 macro | 50mm f/1.8
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