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Nov 16, 2010 04:54 |  #1

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C&C Please

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I'm still learning so go easy on me:lol:
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Nov 16, 2010 07:03 |  #2

Both charming... can't complain about those. Second one stretches interest out more across with width, which is good, but the totally-black sail's less interesting than the reddish rendering above. From that camera angle, the all-important interest created by the layering of mid and background is concentrated in a very narrow strip through the image, but the tall building prevent a much tighter crop. Would be interesting to see the same scene from a more elevated camera position, but that might not have been on offer. The horizon needs a straightening too.

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Nov 16, 2010 08:02 |  #3

I would pop the contrast a bit on both. Not nearly as much on #2 compared to one.

I agree with Tonydee on the interest in #2. It pulls you along the entire image.

Nicely done. Did you photo stitch multiple shots or just crop that way? Both are nice. The sailboats added a nice touch.


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Nov 16, 2010 12:41 as a reply to  @ Sensei125's post |  #4

Thanks for comments. They are both single images cropped. They were taken from a boat so there is no way to increase elevation at all. Point taken about the horizon too.
Photo #2 is my favourite too.:D


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Nov 17, 2010 00:05 |  #5

Both images are interesting to me. The foreground for #2 is better than #1 as the boats are better subjects, but I like the background of #1 more.




  
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