I just recently shot a family session with some fall colors left. However, I chose to do some B&W and some muted color. Please tell me what you think about them? Thanks!
jmalonear Senior Member 651 posts Likes: 7 Joined Feb 2010 Location: Corning, AR More info | Nov 16, 2010 23:10 | #1 I just recently shot a family session with some fall colors left. However, I chose to do some B&W and some muted color. Please tell me what you think about them? Thanks! Friends call me Jay!
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bluecheeze Member 34 posts Joined Oct 2010 More info | Nov 16, 2010 23:16 | #2 i love the 3rd and last one the best. great pics.
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BethanyC Member 100 posts Joined Oct 2010 Location: Washington More info | Nov 16, 2010 23:53 | #3 Oooh that last one is delicious! ---Canon 5Dmkii * Canon 5D * 50mm 1.2 * 50mm 2.5 macro * 35f2 * 85mm 1.8 * 430exii * 580exii---
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Nov 17, 2010 07:06 | #4 Thank you! Friends call me Jay!
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petecrawford Senior Member 644 posts Joined Aug 2007 Location: u.s. More info | Nov 17, 2010 08:39 | #5 3 and 5 are super.
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Nov 17, 2010 13:10 | #6 pete crawford wrote in post #11299985 3 and 5 are super. For some reason in number 4 I think if the adults legs were going the same direction the picture would be more attractive. It looks sorta busy. Still nice! Thanks...as for the legs..I kinda agree, but when a family is walking towards you and the little boy leans down to sister, there was no getting the right pose...I just chose the moment over the pose. Friends call me Jay!
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suecassidy Goldmember 4,102 posts Likes: 37 Joined May 2007 Location: Huntington Beach California More info | Nov 17, 2010 13:35 | #7 I think these are dynamite, really. My only suggestion is for the last shot, and it is a minor detail which would really only matter in a different shot. That is: look at mom's arms in that last shot. They are bent in a weird position that is unnatural and not flattering. Since she is an adult, you can easily direct her to bend her elbows IN. I know she is leaning on them that way for support and in this "grab the moment" shot, you don't have time for that picky detail nonsense. Don't miss my point here, I"m not saying you should have directed her arms elsewhere, I'm just saying that is a detail you want to watch for in OTHER shoots, where it might actually matter. Sue Cassidy
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Nov 17, 2010 23:07 | #8 suecassidy wrote in post #11301474 I think these are dynamite, really. My only suggestion is for the last shot, and it is a minor detail which would really only matter in a different shot. That is: look at mom's arms in that last shot. They are bent in a weird position that is unnatural and not flattering. Since she is an adult, you can easily direct her to bend her elbows IN. I know she is leaning on them that way for support and in this "grab the moment" shot, you don't have time for that picky detail nonsense. Don't miss my point here, I"m not saying you should have directed her arms elsewhere, I'm just saying that is a detail you want to watch for in OTHER shoots, where it might actually matter. I think the clothing choice is great. Simple, not distracting, and it separates them nicely from the background. I especially love the first shot, how you used the backlight to outline them so beautifully. The choice of that couch is unexpected and I love it!!! Great work, Jmalonear!!! Thank you very much! I see exactly what you are referring to with her arm. And those are things I am starting to pay closer attention to...just haven't mastered that yet..lol I definitely will be looking out for that in the future! Friends call me Jay!
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1downfall Goldmember 4,059 posts Likes: 5 Joined Nov 2007 Location: virginia beach, va More info | Nov 18, 2010 07:01 | #9 much agreed..... #2 and #6 for me! Bill
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Nov 18, 2010 10:58 | #10 Nice set. For me, the first one would be better if the feet weren't cut off. WHile I love the bright fall colors, it appears to me that in some images the family's faces are reflecting too much of the orange tones...but that could be because of my cheap work monitor! I'm sure the family was very happy. Michelle Brooks Photography
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Thank you. Family just seen them tonight and loved them! Friends call me Jay!
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rockfordhx Senior Member 696 posts Likes: 1 Joined Jul 2007 Location: US More info | Nov 19, 2010 07:59 | #12 Like all of the shots. I don't like the B/W conversion #$1 as much though. Do you have a color or muted version?
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crazydays Member 209 posts Likes: 1 Joined Apr 2009 More info | Love the isolation of the subject and background-so sharp and background blur- hope I can get that right someday!! It is the black and white one.
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Nov 21, 2010 00:31 | #14 rockfordhx wrote in post #11311806 Like all of the shots. I don't like the B/W conversion #$1 as much though. Do you have a color or muted version? I do have a color version, but due to the sun glare spot, the color didn't seem to work for me. Friends call me Jay!
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