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Nov 18, 2010 19:39 |  #1

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Nov 18, 2010 21:55 |  #2

I would have shot from a lower perspective. The part of the table that is in focus to the left of the cup is distracting.


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Nov 18, 2010 22:09 |  #3

Agreed with the above, maybe it needs more contrast as well. I"d try to apply the rule of 1/3s here somehow


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Nov 18, 2010 23:14 |  #4

Interesting and challenging subject. I agree with the previous posters that I would have tried another angle: more diagonal to fill the frame with glassware and get rid of the meaningless empty space you now have on the righthand side.

As there is no repetition in the subjects in the back row (they are all a different shape) I would have set the DOF a little bit deeper - but that needs some experimenting.


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