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Nov 19, 2010 16:59 |  #1

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Nov 19, 2010 18:35 |  #2

is this HDR? interesting shot but I feel like its cropped too close?


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Nov 19, 2010 20:18 |  #3

The very slightly over bright foiliage suggests hdr, distracting one's attention from what is an otherwise excellent image.


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Nov 20, 2010 06:25 |  #4

HDR? yes. This was taken at sundown and there was very little light to work with. I was really hoping to go for natural look with it though and think I went abit overboard with the vibrance. I've toned down the greens and adjusted the crop. Maybe it works better now?




  
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Nov 20, 2010 12:54 |  #5

Great composition and great use of HDR, it still looks a bit natural.


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Nov 20, 2010 13:22 |  #6

I think it looks great. Maybe dodge the tower a bit to make it stand out a bit more


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Nov 20, 2010 15:08 |  #7

I like this shot. Nice compostion imo too. It looks like a ccomputer animated shot. (from a video game)


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Nov 20, 2010 21:08 |  #8

I like the HDR look great job!


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Nov 21, 2010 10:29 |  #9

Nice shot.

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The very slightly over bright foiliage suggests hdr, distracting one's attention from what is an otherwise excellent image.

I agree. I'd tone it down a little.


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Nov 21, 2010 17:02 |  #10

I really like this image, the sky, the detail of the tower is just awesome, I like the processing quite a bit, so well done on that.




  
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Nov 22, 2010 17:07 |  #11

Thanks for the comments everyone!




  
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Nov 22, 2010 17:13 |  #12

Nice image, but it still looks awfully over-processed to me; I'd be curious to see the original. Does the lighthouse really taper that drastically?


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Nov 22, 2010 18:21 |  #13

This is a brilliant shot. The sky is very, very nice. Yes, it does look overprocessed, but one coud argue that could be the style of the image you want and it certainly makes the image pop (everyone will have an opinion on whether it pops too much). It would be interesting to see the original photograph. Has this been cropped at all from the original, because it could do with a little more headroom above the lighthouse and at the bottom to include the whole of the curved section of fencing.




  
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Nov 22, 2010 20:47 |  #14

Yes, the lighthouse does naturally have that curvature. Here is the original at normal exposure

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Nov 22, 2010 21:07 |  #15

rioni wrote in post #11329878 (external link)
Yes, the lighthouse does naturally have that curvature. Here is the original at normal exposure

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Great composition and its a great location. The shot does seem to have a bit of lens distortion. Hope you dont mind, but rather than faux HDR a single shot,try highlight adjusting the shot and toning down the saturation a bit.

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