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These are a few I personally like from today's shoot. Would like some input from others though so C&C away
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There's too much magenta in them and the first one looks a little overexposed. The second one looks slightly candid which is cute but she's kind of turning away from the main light and therefore the catchlights are lost. Also, her left hand looks deformed - I know that was probably due to the candid nature of the shot but that is the downfall of candids.

WB is off or your tint is too far into the Magenta as "usukshooter" has pointed out.

It looks like your getting to much light fall-off and it's also making the BG look dark with different shades. Almost like a gradient.

#'s 1,2 and 3 have it from the bottom up and #4 has it from left to right. The BG should be all white, IMO.

Here's a quick edit. Hope you don't mind.

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Thanks guys/gals. You are correct about the w/b issue, I corrected it and i am not having this cast problem anymore.

i think they would look better with a background

You will always find people who, when having their photo taken, tend to tilt their head back and you get an "up the nose" shot to one degree or another. Unless you direct their heads down before every shot, you will end up with the same thing, typically. This little boy is one of those. My husband is one of those. Consistently. (People who blink during photos are the same, they will tend to do it all the time, so watch for it.) It is something to always watch for as it is unflattering, and it tends to make their eyes less than open. That's one thing I would take away from this sitting. To watch for that sort of thing. On a good note, with that particular subject, he must have been very comfortable with you as it is really hard to get natural expressions out of a boy that age, and you did that very nicely!