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Nov 23, 2010 17:41 |  #1

Just a few shots around the building that I am currently living in for first semester of medical school. First post in Critique and I've got thick skin so let me know... posted original and the slightly PPed versions. Not very knowledgable with the PP so any help would be great. Thanks

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Nov 24, 2010 11:19 |  #2

My favourite would be the double yellow lines. Whilst the pp work may be a tad overdone on the others, this is one where a slight levels and curves adj plus saturation boost wouldn't go amiss. I'd just be tempted to crop so the vanishing point finishes where the lines end.


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Nov 24, 2010 14:04 as a reply to  @ corkneyfonz's post |  #3

I like your PP. My favorite is the Fire Exit. I would just suggest cropping out the left side a little so it's slightly less distracting. Nice work.




  
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Nov 26, 2010 11:29 as a reply to  @ aggieoutlaw's post |  #4

Thanks for the replies. Keep em coming. There's GOT to be more I can do




  
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Nov 26, 2010 13:33 |  #5

#1, #4, #6, #7 look the most pleasing to me from a PP standpoint (so, I prefer to of the originals and two of the processed ones).

I like the grating shot, but keep wondering if I would have picked up the cigarette butts first (they distract me a bit, but perhaps that is part of the intent of the picture). Guess that is an "artist's preference" kind of thing!


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Nov 28, 2010 12:20 as a reply to  @ Rimmer's post |  #6

Aw man. I didnt even notice the cigs in the pic. How did that get past me...good thing that shot was taken 30 seconds from here. Ill just snap a redo

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Nov 28, 2010 16:20 |  #7

nsakis wrote in post #11358502 (external link)
Aw man. I didnt even notice the cigs in the pic. How did that get past me...good thing that shot was taken 30 seconds from here. Ill just snap a redo

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Oh, heck, I've done way worse than that! :D

I'm amazed at how I can concentrate on composition and exposure while completely failing to notice a big shadow falling across part of the subject. :rolleyes:

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