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richflores1
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Nov 24, 2010 00:29 |  #1

Let me know what you all think.
Thanks in advance.

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Nov 24, 2010 07:58 |  #2

Great job on the lighting and graduated BG..watch stands out nice.
My immediate reaction however was how there is no depth - it is too 2D without getting any of the back of the watchband.




  
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Nov 24, 2010 08:20 |  #3

great comment, thanks!!

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Great job on the lighting and graduated BG..watch stands out nice.
My immediate reaction however was how there is no depth - it is too 2D without getting any of the back of the watchband.



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Nov 24, 2010 19:54 |  #4

I'm drawn to the reflection which unfortunately takes me out of frame at bottom. Maybe a different surface would avoid that, though it has potential charm too. Not suggesting changing the subject/"horizon" placement - the work nicely and emphasise the classy gradation. Perhaps experiment with having the right end down a little more, so it's less effort to look at the face - as someone who likes watches (and owns too many), it's ultimately the face that I want to see, and I don't want to bend my neck too much sideways to do it. From that perspective, the image works well given the old 90 degrees, clockwise of course.

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Nov 24, 2010 19:58 |  #5

The edge of the table is way distracting to me. All the lil reflections of it in each element of the band. I want to look and see what is in the reflection, rather than pay attention to the product which is what should be the center of interest.


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Nov 25, 2010 01:12 |  #6

Finally, one without 10 & 2!


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