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Nov 26, 2010 01:08 |  #1

a very dark church, HDR with CS2 and some Topaz layers added in. critiques please


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Nov 26, 2010 02:08 |  #2

Looks great! I get more of the HDR feel on the ceiling and less on the lower 2/3'rds of the pic.


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Nov 26, 2010 04:11 |  #3

Its hard to fault the image, but perhaps the large areas of red and brown tones washing throughout the scene prevent some of the other colours emerging more strongly - i.e. the colours in the stained glass, the flowers near the centre of the image, the lights hanging from the ceiling, even the blue tones of the books in the pews. I think that the other colours need a chance to come out a bit more, so desaturating some of the russet tones might help achieve this. And some sharpening of the central area of the image might help. But again, its a good photo.


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Nov 26, 2010 09:58 |  #4

Nicely done - yes, a little sharpening would help. Shame you could not ask the guy to move out of the picture.




  
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Nov 27, 2010 01:47 |  #5

thanks for the replies and critques; yes the red and brown do dominate... the guys were musicians warming up their violins b-4 the ceremony. I believe this was my 1st hdr shot ever. When i get some time a bit later i will redo it using photomatix 4. It will be interesting to see if the tones change vs. cs2. I want to maintain the original look or maybe about 2/3 of it if i can quantify it.

yes the stained glass should be more pronounced. it was a dull day outside here in "sunny" Buffalo. Perhaps a layer mask on the darker shot to bring out the glass more...
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Nov 27, 2010 02:21 |  #6

Heres the original HDR.. its actually a little better i think; more contrast and sharper in the center. still cant get that glass to pop more though!!


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Nov 27, 2010 03:41 |  #7

Great capture but have to agree with the above and add that it either needs straightning or some lens correction


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Nov 27, 2010 07:10 as a reply to  @ vmlopes's post |  #8

Nice job for your first tonemapped image.

You could make a selection of the glass window then increase the vibrance/saturation to make it stand out more.


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Nov 27, 2010 08:02 |  #9

I like the second one better. Nice shot and processing.


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Nov 28, 2010 14:17 |  #10

thanks for all the critiques and comments... i tryed to level it in CS2 using the grid. I'll take a look again. Non-L glass makes a difference in perspective for sure... used a kit 17-85 but i'm not blaming the lens... thanks again i really appreciate you HDR veterans!!


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Nov 29, 2010 00:07 |  #11

Crisp detail throughout in the second. Very nice.
Definitely make another copy of the pic with the vibrance turned up.
Then add it as a layer and layer mask the window into the original.


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