Please Critique Logo

here it is

I like number 1.

2. Agree, shorten photog... And slide it to right...

I don't like any of them. The digital text makes me think that my pictures would be pixelated, and Edge is hard to read. When you put them together, it looks like a heavy metal band (the top three anyways). And PHOTOGRAPHY is way too small and spaced out not to mention that it isn't aligned on the right side.

Don't like the name itself or really any of the designs, unless you're shooting only "xtreme sports" or something like that. All I think of is the design of a local company that has the same feel, window tinting or something that aims to "xtreme" people.

MJPhotos24 wrote in post #11355358
Don't like the name itself or really any of the designs, unless you're shooting only "xtreme sports" or something like that. All I think of is the design of a local company that has the same feel, window tinting or something that aims to "xtreme" people.

these are more watermarks than logos. There's too much going on in all of them - you want them to be able to scale well, and should be readable at 1" for business cards etc, plus easily recognizable from afar.

Thank you for your comments. Back to the drawing board!

It looks pretty dated, IMHO. It reminds me of energy drinks and motocross.

Ok, suggestions moving forward?

I don't like any of them. I tried to force myself to pick one but I couldn't. If I were to make a suggestion, why not keep all the font on top the same?

Yeah, it's difficult starting with only one concept. I think I may do the 99designs thing, nice to have 30+ to choose from.

drumsfield wrote in post #11363621
I don't like any of them. I tried to force myself to pick one but I couldn't. If I were to make a suggestion, why not keep all the font on top the same?

I agree with above and others. The digital font is not good, I only look at the edge font but it looks outdated.

USER876 wrote in post #11363041
Ok, suggestions moving forward?

Sounds harsh but my suggestion is to hire a designer. That's what I did and while it was tough to hand over the dough for something that seemed intangible at the time, it was one of the best business purchases I've ever made and remains so to this day.

I guess so, but you are still at the mercy of one persons vision.

cdifoto wrote in post #11369343
Sounds harsh but my suggestion is to hire a designer. That's what I did and while it was tough to hand over the dough for something that seemed intangible at the time, it was one of the best business purchases I've ever made and remains so to this day.

What exactly does CDI mean?