Light: stop motion

Hey so we made this short video as a promo for my friends brother's new photo album. He has muscular dystrophy and when the album comes out a portion of the sales will go to muscular dystrophy research. It is not released yet but we are hoping to get some attention by spreading the video around.

So if you have a minute take a look, get us a hit and if you have a youtube account post a response and let us know what you think.

http://www.youtube.com​/watch?v=2KdBYlVvTak

Thanks in advance.

0:05 - Sound isn't perfectly synced with the words popping up
0:20 - Too short duration on text to read
0:48 - Looks like it says "dot hat" instead of "do that"
1:00 - Weird transition from handheld camera to stationary image
1:04 - Hard to read the text
1:18 - Seems unnatural not to show her face. The whole room is quite cluttered, and she's a bit hard to make out in the dark.
1:37 - MY EYES! Flickering white letters. Not comfortable for reading. For an example of how to do it, look at 1:45

All in all: Use a tripod or similar, and pay closer attention to your text.