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Nov 29, 2010 01:04 |  #1

Just need a bit of critiquing on this shot. I have showed it to a lot of people and they have all really liked it, but none of them are any kind of shutterbugs.

Thanks for the critiques in advance.

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Nov 29, 2010 13:56 |  #2

I think it's a good looking shot. Nice colors and composition.


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Nov 29, 2010 14:44 |  #3

looks OOF to me




  
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Nov 29, 2010 15:08 |  #4

I would suggest just a little bit of cropping: eliminate the dark object at the bottom (I can't tell if it is a railing, beach, ground, or ???). Also crop the left to just eliminate the last light pole. That will put the center of the building smack on the 1/3 point from the left.

Beautiful colors and great texture to the water.


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Nov 29, 2010 16:34 |  #5

Very nice, fabulous colours, just the horizon seems a tad out and the vignette unnecessary.


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Dec 01, 2010 15:34 as a reply to  @ corkneyfonz's post |  #6

Yeah, I agree about the colors. It was a cloudless and somewhat boring (color-wise) sunset and I was trying to compensate with the colors.

The vignette was to help soften the edges so it would better fit a matted frame on all sides.




  
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