Superguitarbitch Junior Member 29 posts Joined Nov 2010 Location: Australia More info | Nov 29, 2010 08:41 | #1 I posted this picture to my Facebook and had a friend comment "shop that flaring out and this will be a sick shot". I included the flare because i thought it worked well. Should i have left the light out? Or is it ok as it is? Critique away! To live through ones own shadow. Mute and blinded, is to really see.
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Nov 29, 2010 09:20 | #3 Do i detect a hint of sarcasm? What about the sunlight? To live through ones own shadow. Mute and blinded, is to really see.
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capri_stylee Member 220 posts Joined Oct 2010 Location: Belfast, Ireland More info | Nov 29, 2010 10:20 | #4 I've no idea how to 'shop out flare, however it could work well with this shot, i just think its a bit too much, if more of the sun was concealed by the trees it would work better imho
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yourdoinitwrong Goldmember 2,394 posts Joined Apr 2009 Location: Indiana More info | I agree with the post above that less flare would make for a cool photo along with more color and contrast. As is, it kind of overwhelms the shot. 5D4 w/BG-E20, 24-105 f/4L, 70-200 f/2.8L IS II, 35 f/1.4L, 85 f/1.8, 100 f/2.8L IS Macro, Sigma 50 f/1.4
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gonzogolf dumb remark memorialized More info | Nov 29, 2010 13:58 | #6 If the flare had any color or depth to it you might have something here. But its not golden rays, its blown highlights and white sky. I think the photo is marginally more interesting with the flare than without, but it still doesnt do much for me.
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ChuckingFluff Goldmember 1,391 posts Likes: 2 Joined Aug 2010 Location: Canada Eh! More info | Nov 29, 2010 14:20 | #7 Nope, doesn't work for me. Theres a big huge blown bright spot in the sky that's not nice to look at. The horizon looks off, theres no real detail in the foreground just shaded in objects and theres no real subject matter. just my 2 cents
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Nov 29, 2010 18:48 | #8 Hmm, ok i can see what you're all talking about. Thanks for the critique! To live through ones own shadow. Mute and blinded, is to really see.
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JimM Goldmember 1,656 posts Likes: 39 Joined Aug 2006 More info | Nov 30, 2010 07:16 | #9 Try it as black and white. I think the flair is the image.
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ChuckingFluff Goldmember 1,391 posts Likes: 2 Joined Aug 2010 Location: Canada Eh! More info | Nov 30, 2010 11:49 | #10 ^^^ WHY? eveytime theres an underexposed picture and overexposed picture a blown image someone has to mention converting it to B&W. A B&W image needs to be properly exposed just like a color image it won't make a bad image any better.
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gonzogolf dumb remark memorialized More info | Nov 30, 2010 11:51 | #11 ChuckingFluff wrote in post #11370345 ^^^ WHY? eveytime theres an underexposed picture and overexposed picture a blown image someone has to mention converting it to B&W. A B&W image needs to be properly exposed just like a color image it won't make a bad image any better. You sir, are forgetting that any image can be converted to BW instantly creating art. Its really pretty magical. The only thing better is selective color
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ChuckingFluff Goldmember 1,391 posts Likes: 2 Joined Aug 2010 Location: Canada Eh! More info | Nov 30, 2010 13:04 | #12 ^^^^ Thanks I needed that.
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yoyodunno Member 147 posts Joined Aug 2010 Location: Maryland, USA More info | Nov 30, 2010 13:07 | #13 Could you warm up the white balance to make the sun more golden, and see what it looks like just for kicks? http://www.flickr.com/photos/n00b_photos/
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Nov 30, 2010 22:01 | #14 Is that any better? I think the sunlight also makes the picture as well, but, everyone to their own. To live through ones own shadow. Mute and blinded, is to really see.
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yoyodunno Member 147 posts Joined Aug 2010 Location: Maryland, USA More info | Nov 30, 2010 22:08 | #15 Yeah I liked it before, but I like it a lot more now. http://www.flickr.com/photos/n00b_photos/
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