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Nov 29, 2010 14:23 |  #1

Was not expecting to do this AT ALL but they just celebrated their 2 years of being together (ring is in the works) and they asked me to take some shots for them. These were done at 2 pm and I was jumping on a plane soon after so the light I had is what I had... Honest critique on the PP and shots please. Also I am working with a POS screen so I may not see what you do! Thanks! :)

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Nov 29, 2010 20:54 |  #2

Anyone? I have them finished and hoping to send them to her soon but I really wanted your alls opinions on what you thought?

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Nov 29, 2010 21:13 |  #3

I think they are nice.
Personally i think the background in 1 and 2 are a little busy, but its not bad. I think they will love them!

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Nov 29, 2010 21:21 |  #4
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background in #2 might benefit from some desaturation, it's very bright.

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Nov 29, 2010 21:38 as a reply to  @ The Framed Life's post |  #5

Second one is super contrasty, you lose details in the darks area.
I love the last one the best, fabulous.
.First one is at an angle?I would be tempted to crop the first one as well.just me.Just to the bottom of their hands.
Next to last has a weird crop...

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Nov 30, 2010 06:43 |  #6

Thanks! I will go and fix number 2! #3 really isn't one of my favs, I guess playing with the crop will help! Thank you all for the feedback!! :)

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Nov 30, 2010 14:09 as a reply to  @ MommaBird80's post |  #7

I like them. :) The only think I don't like is the floating fingers on #3.




  
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