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Dec 01, 2010 16:07 |  #1

C&C appreciated!


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Dec 01, 2010 18:57 |  #2

Very nice image. I like this one a lot.
The land to the left is a little distracting IMO, but overall still a great shot.


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Dec 02, 2010 08:36 |  #3

steven32 wrote in post #11378987 (external link)
Very nice image. I like this one a lot.
The land to the left is a little distracting IMO, but overall still a great shot.

Thanks for your comment. I'm glad this is a place close to my house, so i can go back anytime and try some new compositions, i'll definetly will try to keep the land out of the composition next time.


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Dec 02, 2010 10:28 as a reply to  @ wouter88's post |  #4

It feels very soft to me, done on purpose?


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Dec 02, 2010 11:29 |  #5

How long was your exposure? Came out great!


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Dec 02, 2010 12:40 |  #6

Would love to see the exif info and if you did any post work, looks nice overall though I agree with the first note about the land being distracting.


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Dec 02, 2010 16:22 |  #7

Very nice, smooth shading and pleasing colors. Looks like a long exposure. The photo's a little soft in the background. If it's just this web version, maybe a little Unsharp Mask filter in Photoshop, or if it's in the original, try dropping the aperture to f/16 or so.


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Dec 03, 2010 08:16 |  #8

Thanks all for your feedback.
The shot was taken with a sigma 10-20mm at 12mm.
AV: F25 (which explains the softness, but i actually wanted it to look a little soft)
TV: 5 seconds
iso: 100
I took another shot at 20 seconds, and later in photoshop used a layer mask to brighten up the foreground a little using that shot. I also boosted the saturation a bit and played around with the levels.


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Dec 03, 2010 08:24 |  #9

Here's the one i didn't brighten up the foreground using a second shot.


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