Some cosplay.. C&C please?

I'm very, very, very new to people photography, so please do tell me what I need to work on. These shots are of my sis in law modeling her own costumes she makes, as she can't afford a model to do that for her right now. She is pleased with my work, but I would like to get better. She posts them on her facebook, both her own personal page and the account she made for her costume store she uses to advertise her services. The shoots I do for her are free, btw. This isn't the first shoot I've done of her, but this is only about the 3rd or 4th.

Enough babbling. Time for the shots:
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Most of the fun about Cosplay are the costumes. You can't see the costume in these. BTW...you can post up to 8.

bbvdm wrote in post #11387656
Most of the fun about Cosplay are the costumes. You can't see the costume in these. BTW...you can post up to 8.

I'll post a few more in the original post then and include a full body shot. Thanks for letting me know!

bbvdm wrote in post #11387656
Most of the fun about Cosplay are the costumes. You can't see the costume in these.

+1. Better cropping would go a long way with these.

kraaazymike wrote in post #11388021
+1. Better cropping would go a long way with these.

Most of these aren't crops. That just shows my inexperience even more. lol I suck at framing people, but I'll get better. I'll try harder to showcase the costume next time.