This is a working print of a image for a series called "surf painting" that I am creating. Open to critique.
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jetcode Cream of the Crop 6,235 posts Likes: 1 Joined Jul 2009 Location: West Marin More info | Dec 03, 2010 18:28 | #1 PermanentlyThis is a working print of a image for a series called "surf painting" that I am creating. Open to critique.
5DII Leica 180/2.8 APO
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Quaz8r Member 142 posts Joined Nov 2010 Location: Sacramento, Ca More info | Dec 03, 2010 22:18 | #2 Nice shot with good effects. My eyes keep going to the bottom as I would like to see more of the sand effect. Nice photo..
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Whazel Junior Member 29 posts Joined May 2008 Location: Northern Minnesota More info | Dec 04, 2010 02:43 | #3 Yep - I agree with Quaz8r - neat shot indeed. www.Amy Machmer Photography.com
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jetcode THREAD STARTER Cream of the Crop 6,235 posts Likes: 1 Joined Jul 2009 Location: West Marin More info | Dec 05, 2010 12:00 | #4 PermanentlyThanks for the observations. Here's another image from the same series. I am thinking the light quality may be better mid day than after sun down. I battled cloning out the small foam line and left it (for now).
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argyle Cream of the Crop 8,187 posts Likes: 24 Joined Apr 2007 Location: DFW, Texas More info | The first one is interesting. Have you given any though to cropping the image to a point just below the wave curl? I tried by scrolling the screen and liked the way the straight lines juxtaposed themselves into an abstract look with varying lines and shapes. Just a thought... "Fat, drunk and stupid is no way to go through life, son". - Dean Wormer
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jetcode THREAD STARTER Cream of the Crop 6,235 posts Likes: 1 Joined Jul 2009 Location: West Marin More info | Dec 05, 2010 17:39 | #6 PermanentlyArgyle I see what you mean. I'll be giving it more thought over the next few weeks.
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corkneyfonz Goldmember 2,477 posts Likes: 5 Joined Oct 2009 Location: United Kingdom More info | Dec 05, 2010 20:12 | #7 Intense captures which are full of the patterns and forces of nature. The bold shadow at the bottom adds a menacing mimicry of the waves, dark and brooding, with the first version being my favourite. However, I suspect that this part may prove slightly controversial when these days, detail is expected to be extracted from the darkest of areas.
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jetcode THREAD STARTER Cream of the Crop 6,235 posts Likes: 1 Joined Jul 2009 Location: West Marin More info | Dec 06, 2010 10:29 | #8 PermanentlyThere is detail in the darkest sand. The monitor is a limited gamut viewing device. In print the darkest sand will look like a dark Hershey bar with sand granules in it. Detail will be visible.
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Snydremark my very own Lightrules moment More info | Cool idea; I've tried doing some of these before but never came up with something, ultimately, interesting. - Eric S.: My Birds/Wildlife
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