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Dec 04, 2010 15:43 |  #1

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Dec 04, 2010 17:08 |  #2

Nice colour.
Silhouette effect is good.
Looks tilted.
Lots of dust on sensor.
No exif data or other info that may help criticisms.


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Dec 04, 2010 18:23 |  #3

Martin Dixon wrote in post #11395701 (external link)
Nice colour.
Silhouette effect is good.
Looks tilted.
Lots of dust on sensor.
No exif data or other info that may help criticisms.


Thanks Martin! I see now that it is tilted.... Where do you see the dust?




  
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Dec 04, 2010 20:00 |  #4

love the shot, its really good but maybe you could have tried including something in the foreground?


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Dec 04, 2010 21:26 |  #5

Dust in upper left, unless of course it's a UFO:) Otherwise nice.


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Dec 04, 2010 22:20 |  #6

jsinon wrote in post #11396816 (external link)
Dust in upper left, unless of course it's a UFO:) Otherwise nice.

:) No UFO--just a bird! LOL




  
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Dec 04, 2010 22:21 |  #7

Road_Rebel wrote in post #11396407 (external link)
love the shot, its really good but maybe you could have tried including something in the foreground?

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Dec 05, 2010 07:49 as a reply to  @ cp1005's post |  #8

look like dust In the lower left corner also :p


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Dec 05, 2010 11:13 |  #9

Dust: I saw the "dust" already mentioned - are you sure it's a bird! In this image dust is relatively hard to spot, I'd do a dust check if I were you - https://photography-on-the.net …9352&highlight=​dust+check It won't hurt!


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Dec 05, 2010 12:51 |  #10

Since when the birds are round ?? are we still in 2010 ? ahahah lol


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Dec 05, 2010 14:20 |  #11
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the monochromatic color is beautiful and the composition works well. I am noticing a dark dot in the left hand sky which looks like sensor dust. Should probably clone that out. I also think the bottom left side is a tad flat in feature and color but hey, mother nature bats last.




  
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