Few pics from Seattle weekend away. Looking for some composition advice to make improvements. Were total candids.
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gsm275 Hatchling 9 posts Joined Dec 2010 More info | Dec 09, 2010 11:34 | #1 Few pics from Seattle weekend away. Looking for some composition advice to make improvements. Were total candids. 2 3
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Meanderthal Senior Member 532 posts Likes: 2 Joined Aug 2009 Location: Canada, btw Ottawa-Toronto More info | Dec 09, 2010 12:03 | #2 The first two are interesting, and I like the compositions. They might have benefited from fill flash, especially #2 with, say, -1 FEC. All three seem leaning a bit to the left. #1 was taken from near ground level, nice, and I'm assuming that the background of this candid is the best available (the structure on the right is not ideal). Thank you. http://spitzhaven.zenfolio.com/
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ca7696 Senior Member 679 posts Joined Apr 2005 Location: New Jersey, USA More info | Dec 09, 2010 18:35 | #3 yes i agree first two look a little dark to me
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corkneyfonz Goldmember 2,477 posts Likes: 5 Joined Oct 2009 Location: United Kingdom More info | Dec 09, 2010 20:28 | #4 The first looks a bit too much like the work of a dedicated stalker. The third just looks like a parked car, whilst the second is pretty amazing with a quality that overshadows your other efforts.
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clarkbecker Senior Member 306 posts Joined Feb 2008 More info | Dec 09, 2010 23:16 | #5 |
shopguy10 Member 59 posts Joined Dec 2010 More info | Dec 10, 2010 09:15 | #6 Number two has a nice grittyness to it. How much of that was from post production? I agree that #1 looks a bit "stalkeresque" and noisy. As for #3, I like the composition. The sky makes a nice "V" shape that helps draw your eye towards the subject (car). As for the subject, It could stand to be a bit sharper. Nice stuff! "Just keep shooting!" Gripped 50D, 50mm 1.8 fantastic plastic!, 28-70m 2.8, 70-200mm 2.8 and some other crap!
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