Get Korrected

b-rice wrote in post #11463879
wait. i don't get to be publicly humiliated? ****. haha thanks though!

you don't - the deer felt pretty offended though = just look at his eyes!

Not to hijack Korrektor's most excellent thread but I have a comment on your image. On my monitor the shadow side of the face and shoulder have a slight magenta cast to them, almost the color of a bruise. The shadow could be a little more neutral in tone. Thanks K for letting us outsiders make some noise in your world!

amber j2010 wrote in post #11459135
Enjoying the thread.
I took a b&w film course in college, majored in painting, and have been using a dslr for a little over a year. My photoshop skills are sketchy. I enjoy photographing people. I like the expression on this little man.

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vipergts831 wrote in post #11462454
John:

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I think this pic is a little too laconic. There's really so little to see here, that I can't really put this to a review. I wish the kid looked into the lens. Then I could read a story in his eyes. The fence would have played the role of a "cell/cage", and that would have get my mind going. Here's is not looking at the viewer and is disconnected emotionally and visually...

jetcode wrote in post #11464926
Not to hijack Korrektor's most excellent thread but I have a comment on your image. On my monitor the shadow side of the face and shoulder have a slight magenta cast to them, almost the color of a bruise. The shadow could be a little more neutral in tone. Thanks K for letting us outsiders make some noise in your world!

gosh, this is not MY thread I just started it _ please comment, critique and have fun for goodness sake ))

StimpyJCat wrote in post #11462805
Please "korrect" this shot, but don't say anything negative or belittl...jk

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hahah ))) it's great that you are seeing the streamlined perspective and textures and also it's awesome that you are training your eye to do so but capturing stuff like this. I consider this image an exercise and sketch, rather then a polished shot. Apply what you have learned to something more visually exciting. I am thinking that you are on the right track.

korrektor wrote in post #11464947
gosh, this is not MY thread I just started it _ please comment, critique and have fun for goodness sake ))

It's YOUR thread in a public forum! Can't escape that easily no matter how many pixels you pound down for lunch!

if this was MY thread I'd allow cursing

korrektor wrote in post #11464942
I think this pic is a little too laconic. There's really so little to see here, that I can't really put this to a review. I wish the kid looked into the lens. Then I could read a story in his eyes. The fence would have played the role of a "cell/cage", and that would have get my mind going. Here's is not looking at the viewer and is disconnected emotionally and visually...

Thats how John is most of the time. Disconnected from what is around him when he believes no one is noticing. I have one of him facing me after that. Maybe i can dig it up and give another look. Sometimes its difficult to know when to have an image with the subject looking at you and when to have them looking away. However, practice, practice, and some practice

Ok korrektor do that Voodoo that you do so well

lecherro wrote in post #11464227
This thread seems to be so Korrector can swell his own ego. IMHO this thread is useless. I think the title of the thread says it all. "Get Korrekted" WTF

lecherro wrote in post #11464446
For the record i read the whole thread. and prolly even learned something.

awesome

here you go Korrektor. I've been shooting for a couple years and this is one of my first head shots. Make me better!

I'll ABSOLUTELY take my shots from you- completely respect your opinion...shoot me down, but please keep it constructive... photography about 2 years this December, but only in that ocd way...always took pics before.....a recent shoot

I'm back and without that hideous drop shadow.

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korrektor wrote in post #11464981
if this was MY thread I'd allow cursing

Yeah, me too, Misha.

Great thread mate. I dunno why people are posting here, though, without reading it first. If they had, they'd only be posting one image at a time. I did LOL at the people complaining about the thread, that was brilliant too! This thread is 100% win

I'm not the K but he gave us a little lee way here. Lovely shot, great model. What a look. My only nit pic is white dress - white wall. You are losing the defining line separating the 2 white elements. Actually monitor angle plays a big effect here. It's much better when looking at it eye level. Other than that I'd love to see a whole series done in this style and set.

johendley wrote in post #11465525
I'll ABSOLUTELY take my shots from you- completely respect your opinion...shoot me down, but please keep it constructive... photography about 2 years this December, but only in that ocd way...always took pics before.....a recent shoot