Shower?

A little too abstract for my taste... or I'm not getting what you're saying entirely.

I'm not really getting this. It seems unbalanced, even as an abstract.

it looks off to me

The light intensity increases towards the edge, which simply serves to draw the eye out. If you want to crop it there, consider burning the top edge a little. I can see some appeal... keep experimenting.

I'm assuming a firework. If so you've missed the money shot but may work as part of a pyrotechnics slideshow.

Thanks for comments.

Yeah, it was a firework, my first attempt ever at them. Most of them were rubbish, so I thought I would play around with crops to make them a bit more interesting, might put a couple more up tomorrow.