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Dec 16, 2010 12:32 |  #1

Wake up in the morning feeling like P Diddy~

Nah joking. Wake up in the morning feeling tired but once i grab hold of my camera i just feel so alive and awake. So i decided to just look out of the balcony window and realize it's just the right time for sunrise. Immediately set up my tripod and stuff and start shooting!

C&C welcome for this photo which i feel is the best among the rest.

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Dec 16, 2010 13:54 |  #2

Regarding composition I feel its a bit off. Not sure how the original scenery looks like but imo it would look better if you could add more of the coast and a bit less sky.

Colorwise I think the clouds are a bit too dark while closer to the ground it gets a bit hazy.


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Dec 16, 2010 14:13 |  #3

Grimage wrote in post #11464020 (external link)
Regarding composition I feel its a bit off. Not sure how the original scenery looks like but imo it would look better if you could add more of the coast and a bit less sky.

Colorwise I think the clouds are a bit too dark while closer to the ground it gets a bit hazy.

Yeah, it's the fog as it is raining during the night.

The coast is actually construction works so there are quite a bit of cranes and trucks here and there which i feel will spoil the photo. However i did shot this which shows a bit of the cranes and a brighter sky.

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Dec 16, 2010 14:22 |  #4

Like 2nd one better


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Dec 16, 2010 14:30 as a reply to  @ jarias's post |  #5

I think the second one is indeed better. I tried to crop a bit of the first image as well... I am not gonna post it since you did not allow image editing, but try it yourself. Just crop off the dark cloud part and the image immediately gains more balance.


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Dec 16, 2010 20:16 |  #6

Here's another vote for #2. Very nice.


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Dec 16, 2010 22:23 |  #7

jarias wrote in post #11464217 (external link)
Like 2nd one better

Thanks jarias!

Grimage wrote in post #11464265 (external link)
I think the second one is indeed better. I tried to crop a bit of the first image as well... I am not gonna post it since you did not allow image editing, but try it yourself. Just crop off the dark cloud part and the image immediately gains more balance.

I did? Oh well but still you can post it up anyway, i don't mind. =D
I just wanna learn.

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Here's another vote for #2. Very nice.

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