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SYS Cream of the Crop  More info | Dec 16, 2010 23:43 | #1 Effect wise and what not... HOSTED PHOTO please log in to view hosted photos in full size.
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focus.pocus Goldmember  3,423 posts Likes: 2 Joined Jul 2009 Location: Geneva Switzerland / South Carolina U.S.A. More info | Dec 16, 2010 23:49 | #2 not for me... but Critique is subjective... does it work for you? or your client? I know, right? I'm just sayin'...
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jetcode Cream of the Crop 6,235 posts Likes: 1 Joined Jul 2009 Location: West Marin More info | Dec 16, 2010 23:50 | #3  PermanentlyNot for me though I like the light on the rest of the shot. Back light is great but white will obliterate most everything else in an image since it is the strongest draw in the eye due to survival instincts.
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MartinDixon Slit-scan project master  More info | Dec 17, 2010 06:20 | #4 Blinding white light just detracts from the image - what is it trying to "say"? flickr
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CallumPhoto Senior Member  661 posts Joined Dec 2010 More info | Dec 17, 2010 07:06 | #5 For me yes and no, not completely but I think it would be less exciting without it and more traditional. Which may or not be a good thing, I'm not sure what the intended purposes are. I think a mid ground would have been better, a smaller highlight or something. Otherwise it's fine, except maybe fix the background up on the right corner Callum Bright Photography; Website
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GadgetAddicted Member 42 posts Joined Nov 2010 More info | Dec 17, 2010 09:29 | #6 Doesn't work for me...the light is way too blinding. If it was a dimly lit light becoming a round bokehlicious blob, I would have preferred that...and to the side not next to his face..
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Spike44 Goldmember 2,155 posts Likes: 3 Joined Dec 2007 More info | Dec 17, 2010 09:30 | #7 The light really does not suit this otherwise really nice photo. If it was more hidden behind his neck/head it would be a super backlit.....as it is, it looks like you were trying too hard to go artsy.
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Dec 17, 2010 11:10 | #8 Thank you all for your comments -- very helpful.  HOSTED PHOTO please log in to view hosted photos in full size.
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Spike44 Goldmember 2,155 posts Likes: 3 Joined Dec 2007 More info | Dec 17, 2010 11:16 | #9 Now you're talking SYS - 100% better.
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corkneyfonz Goldmember  2,477 posts Likes: 5 Joined Oct 2009 Location: United Kingdom More info | Dec 17, 2010 11:45 | #10 The second is pretty amazing, the first as you're probably aware doesn't quite work.
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Titus213 Cream of the Crop  More info | Dec 17, 2010 13:35 | #11 First doesn't work for me. Dave
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Chippy569 Goldmember  1,851 posts Likes: 1 Joined Dec 2010 Location: Minneapolis, MN More info | Dec 17, 2010 13:38 | #12 The light source in #1 is too much -- if it was less bright and maybe tinted yellow a bit it might work better. Gear List
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Dec 17, 2010 14:47 | #13 Okay, so I shed the frame and corrected the purple bleed on the shoulder....  HOSTED PHOTO please log in to view hosted photos in full size.
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Dec 17, 2010 14:49 | #14 Ya I love the light in the 2nd photo... Ann Robinson
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