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Dec 18, 2010 22:09 |  #1

Thanks for your advice/comments in advance...

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Dec 18, 2010 23:57 |  #2

the only thing I dislike is that the plants in the foreground look, 'hot', as if lit by a direct flash.

Otherwise, I really like that a lot.


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Dec 19, 2010 01:04 |  #3

Thanks for the feedback. Actually that's because of the coloring of the leaves. :)


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Dec 19, 2010 06:38 as a reply to  @ WebDevGuy's post |  #4

I'd like to see the lower right corner cropped, and possible clone the stray stalk that's flopped over. Other than that, its a pretty nice shot.


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Dec 19, 2010 06:50 |  #5

+1 on cropping more at the bottom to eliminate the empty right corner.


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Dec 19, 2010 07:22 |  #6

Great suggestions. Thanks.


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Dec 19, 2010 11:49 |  #7

Great capture and another vote for the minor crop and maybe a repair of the "torn" sky.


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