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Dec 19, 2010 12:45 |  #1

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Dec 19, 2010 13:20 |  #2

I think these are all over the size limit permitted:

"Image Size Limits: Image must fit in 1024 pixels by 1024 pixels box."

.....regardless, they are too big to judge as I had to keep scrolling to see the whole image.
You might want to number them BTW.




  
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Dec 19, 2010 13:39 |  #3

Looks like the lighting was less than ideal. My favourite is the fourth one which seems a little less harsh on the contrast front than the others.


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Dec 19, 2010 13:48 |  #4

I liked how you captured the motion and the dancer's pasion for her craft. However, all of the images had either a soft focus or blur of the dancer's face, which detracted from the images. If her face was sharper, I think the images would be improved. I also found that there was a lot of empty space at the top of Images #1 and 2. I recommend cropping to eliminate some of the negative space because it does not add anything to the image.

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Dec 19, 2010 19:23 |  #5

sorry for the oversized picture, moderator please delete after a day, lol!!!! this is my first time to shoot concert/in motion subject... what do i need to improve my focus... most of them i shoot in ISO 2000 and AI focus.. how can i improve this?

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Dec 25, 2010 09:09 |  #6

websterparinas wrote in post #11481244 (external link)
this is my first time to shoot concert/in motion subject... what do i need to improve my focus... most of them i shoot in ISO 2000 and AI focus.. how can i improve this?

thanks guys!!!!

I thought the motion blur in her body was fine but her face was out of focus. I have a couple of suggetsions to improve this. Open up the aperture so more light hits the sensor. This will allow you to get a fast shutter and get better focus. Another suggetsion is to use a tripod to eliminate the camera shake that may be blurring the image. A lens with image stablization will also help to reduce the problems of camera shake.


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