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Dec 22, 2010 15:40 |  #1
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Dec 24, 2010 14:21 |  #2

What kind of critique are you looking for?

Sidelight is nice and you avoided glare on the glasses. I think I would do something about the shadow on the right as it's a bit strong - perhaps use a reflector for fill or move away further from the wall.

I also think the framing of the shot is slightly odd. The knees are just in the way, so I would consider just doing a torso-up shot with the arms crossed.




  
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Dec 24, 2010 14:36 |  #3

What is the story you're trying to tell? A lonely man awaits..

Or are you just looking for a technical critique?


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