ok, so I prefer doing nature photography (critters, birds etc) but have been playing with some "country images". Would like to get your commets/suggestions on the images below and see any edits you would make to the images to improve!
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hramakers Senior Member 679 posts Joined Feb 2010 Location: Pendergrass, GA More info | Dec 22, 2010 20:01 | #1 ok, so I prefer doing nature photography (critters, birds etc) but have been playing with some "country images". Would like to get your commets/suggestions on the images below and see any edits you would make to the images to improve! #2 Thanks Holger
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Dec 23, 2010 07:51 | #2 hmmmm....no comments at all? Didn't think they were that bad! Holger
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argyle Cream of the Crop 8,187 posts Likes: 24 Joined Apr 2007 Location: DFW, Texas More info | I''ll be honest...composition-wise, there's really not a lot to hold the viewer's attention. In the second, you do a good job of using the fence line to help "pull" the viewer into the frame, but it ends in a blob of shadows at the trees...there's nothing of interest once one has been drawn in by the fence. Also, it seems like the left side has fallen out of the DOF range, resulting in out of focus. "Fat, drunk and stupid is no way to go through life, son". - Dean Wormer
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e02937 Goldmember 2,714 posts Joined Dec 2008 More info | Dec 23, 2010 08:34 | #4 I like the conversion on the first one, the second one has potential. Perhaps if you cropped out the shadow at the bottom left of the frame and converted in the b&w. Canon 7d
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Thats what I was looking for. Composition so different in these images that working with critters. Need to work on training my "minds eye" Holger
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JohnSchell Senior Member More info | Dec 23, 2010 11:52 | #6 The first image - I would have cropped out the building on the left. It distracts from the main subject. Also, when you're taking an photo of something like an old house straight on pics are boring. Find the one thing about the house that you find incredibly interesting - a rock in the chimney, a missing stair, an initial carved in the wood, something that makes is stand out from everything else youv'e ever seen and photograph that.
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corkneyfonz Goldmember 2,477 posts Likes: 5 Joined Oct 2009 Location: United Kingdom More info | Dec 23, 2010 11:58 | #7 I like the b/w in the first but I'd be tempted to crop the fence in the foreground.
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NeutronBoy Goldmember 2,052 posts Likes: 2 Joined Jul 2007 Location: LI, NY More info | Dec 23, 2010 13:48 | #8 I like the composition of the 2nd photo, but am not a big fan of muted colors in general (just one opinion). Sony A7C, Sony A6000, 5D Mark II, 40D, 350d
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Dec 23, 2010 15:31 | #9 Points taken,, thank you Holger
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