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Dec 27, 2010 19:30 |  #1

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This was shot during the snow storm on December 26th, let me know what you guys think.

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Dec 28, 2010 07:52 |  #2

any comments?


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Dec 28, 2010 08:16 |  #3

Sorry to say, but you have to rethink this one. The obvious subject, which is the only thing that is in focus, is the tree. But you cut off the top and the bottom and pushed it all the way to the left. If there's snow in the image, it's green and underexposed. You would do yourself a favor the next time you see something interesting by studying it for a bit and determining how you want to present it. Then adjust your composition and camera setting with that goal in mind.


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Dec 28, 2010 08:20 |  #4

The snow is on the ground and all over the place in the background. The image itself was taken at night time and I changed my settings for manual exposure to make sure I got the right exposure. I did some editing to give it that dark look...thanks for the feedback.


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Dec 30, 2010 04:06 |  #5

Yup have another crack at this one buddy.

The car in the background with snow on it looks interesting....


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Dec 30, 2010 21:18 |  #6

I like it for what it is.

I never understood why some people freak out if part of a subject is out of frame. It's placed nicely in the composition and don't mind at all the top is cut off.

It gets a little boring to look at after a while, but colors are nice too.


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Dec 30, 2010 21:42 |  #7

It's not very captivating. I don't mind the composition, I think there should be more detail or sharpness in the tree though.




  
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Dec 30, 2010 22:41 |  #8

I think I like it, but I think I'd like to see it in black and white? Also whats the "line" at the top right corner? It caught my attention pretty quick after the tree, before anything else.




  
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Jan 01, 2011 02:02 |  #9

Really green for my taste and I would bet the clients as well. Unless it is a theme you are going for.


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Jan 01, 2011 17:38 |  #10

Really like it and i like the green effect




  
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