Please critique. Before and after:
LettieVonDread Senior Member 331 posts Joined Nov 2010 Location: Shelby, NC More info | Dec 28, 2010 18:26 | #1 |
corkneyfonz Goldmember 2,477 posts Likes: 5 Joined Oct 2009 Location: United Kingdom More info | Dec 28, 2010 19:26 | #2 The edit is much better in terms of white balance. However, the restorative work to the under exposure seems to have brought up a little bit of noise on the dress.
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Dec 28, 2010 19:46 | #3 I tried to blur out the noise on the dress but I didn't want to lose too much of the detail. Any suggestions?
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Dec 28, 2010 19:57 | #4 *I deleted this photo because I think I can only do so many photos.
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Titus213 Cream of the Crop More info | Dec 28, 2010 20:07 | #5 There seems to be quite a disparity in skin color between the face and the legs. It looks like you cooled them all down the same. Dave
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Dec 28, 2010 20:11 | #6 That's my biggest issues with this picture, Titus. IDK what to do to get the skin tones to match. I think the face had cool lighting and the legs had warm lighting. We used a few different lights trying to get it bright enough. I was just practicing poses, but I really liked this one and was hoping to save it. I've been staring at it so long, I don't know if I'm seeing pink or purple or blue in my face. Either way, I'm at a wall with that one.
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Titus213 Cream of the Crop More info | Dec 28, 2010 21:15 | #7 I use a group of actions from Totally Rad Actions. Included are two actions that let you warm or cool a picture and mask out what you don't want. It does a pretty decent job. Using smart objects is the only other way that comes to mind. Dave
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Dec 28, 2010 21:17 | #8 HAHA.. No, my legs are really that white. LOL
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Titus213 Cream of the Crop More info | Dec 28, 2010 21:28 | #9 Sorry about that....... Dave
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Dec 28, 2010 21:29 | #10
Do you think maybe I'm a little too yellow?
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Dec 28, 2010 21:32 | #11 BTW Thank you both for the critiques.
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Titus213 Cream of the Crop More info | Dec 28, 2010 21:36 | #12 A bit too yellow. Do you use Photoshop? Dave
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Dec 28, 2010 21:52 | #13 I'm very much self taught. And amateur. I'm going cross eyed over here. I think this is better. Thoughts?
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Dec 28, 2010 21:56 | #14 Now it feels gray. I'm going to bed for now. Give my eyes a break. Thanks again!
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Stemolandmar Mostly Lurking 15 posts Joined Dec 2010 More info | Dec 28, 2010 22:09 | #15 LettieVonDread wrote in post #11532036 I'm very much self taught. And amateur. I'm going cross eyed over here. I think this is better. Thoughts?
Boy, I don't know Lettie. You've made some good progress from your first edit at the top. The color looks much more balanced here, to me. Maybe a little flat but I think you're close. Good work!
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