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Dec 29, 2010 04:23 |  #1

C&C is welcome, thank you !


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Dec 29, 2010 11:22 |  #2

I liked it immedietly, good leading lines in, my eye went straight to the face on the wall, then across the shelves to the ornaments. My only super picky point is on the top shelf on the far right is a bust and its almost total shadow, but thats just me :)

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Dec 29, 2010 11:44 |  #3

Thanks Bangtwister :)

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Dec 29, 2010 12:07 |  #4
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Absolutely, super composition and lighting. Great office layout. Love the face on the wall.


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Dec 29, 2010 14:51 |  #5

Nice composition, I would just fix the chromatic aberation on the shelves from the right, top to bottom as I can see quite a lot of purple fringing. :)




  
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Dec 29, 2010 23:28 |  #6

csondagar: Thank you :)

Albertonman: One aspect of getting C&C is that other people see what i did not see, thanks you for mentioning the Fringing will fix that :)

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Dec 30, 2010 01:16 as a reply to  @ JimFly's post |  #7

One or two steps to the left would have been a better angle. Nice colors and design though!

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Dec 30, 2010 05:26 |  #8

Mark II: Thanks, i will try that :)

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