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Dec 30, 2010 23:59 |  #1

c and c would be much appreciated here. it's the first black and white I've done with the new camera. haven't read anything yet about contrast, etc. with black and white. I plan to read up on it, but just want to see if I'm off to a good start. I'm not sensitive, so feel free to blast away if I'm not...

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Dec 31, 2010 00:01 |  #2

For what it is, I love it the way it is.




  
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Dec 31, 2010 00:42 |  #3

I think this tree would do better against a more neutral background. There is nothing wrong with the b/w and grey shades. They all look good. But you made it hard on yourself with the composition.


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Dec 31, 2010 10:32 |  #4

The background is distracting and there is no center of interest - each of the branches draws your eye right out of the frame. It looks very flat against the background, too.


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Jan 01, 2011 01:52 |  #5

I think if the BG were a little OOF it would help.


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Jan 01, 2011 09:48 |  #6

I agree, Lovely photo but Background trees distracting from the picture.

"Cant see the wood for the Trees" comes to mind.


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