Birds of Paradise @ Sunset -- Critique Corner in photography-on-the.net forums

jonsegal

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Dec 31, 2010 03:06 | #1

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John Schell

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Dec 31, 2010 10:10 | #2

What sort of critique are you looking for?

What were your settings?

What were you going for, here?

I haven't been around this forum long, but I would guess that you'd have a better chance at a response if you posted something in addition to the photos.

Website || Instagram

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lecherro

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Jan 01, 2011 01:52 | #3

3 is the best. All the others are too washed out to see the beautiful color that these flowers are known for. And the comosition is kinda of wonky on that one.

First step........ Take the lens cap off.

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LettieVonDread

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Jan 01, 2011 15:50 | #4

You seem to be struggling with what you want your subject to be. The sunset does nothing to compliment the flowers in the way that you have captured them. The colors are washed out.

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jonsegal
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Jan 01, 2011 23:06 | #5

I liked the way the light filtered through the flowers, causing them to glow.

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