A few shots I did of my little sister

C&C Please! I really want to improve! I tried to be fairly creative with these or at least try new things.

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Kalah, You did pretty good on them. On the first three there seems to be to much empty space at the top. On number 6 watch out for the forehead wrinkles when the subject is looking up. With such a pretty sister to practice on you are going to be putting out some nice work real soon.

I agree with Locky. Everything looks good, just a little too much empty space in some of them.

Thanks ya'll. That seems to be a critique in most of my pictures, for some reason I like it so I keep forgetting. I need to work on that next time

#6 is your best shot. For the rest you can crop in a lot to get better images.

Mossman6 wrote in post #11552467
#6 is your best shot. For the rest you can crop in a lot to get better images.

I think that you are off to a good start. Try to get her to move a little, bend the arms and wrist some etc....and yes, #6 takes it for me.