First Upload into Critique!

Tonemapped with Olonea Software.

Need to level it out somehow. Do you think I should remove the pylon from the top? Was taken at our local power station.

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I think I would straighten the image and then crop to remove the upper area...and maybe tighten up the image on the sides too.

Too bad there's some ghosting in the details on the right and the floor.

Here's what I tried using your image.

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I think the photo works.

Things I'd fix:

Crop everything but the square surrounding the tunnel that the child is in.

or


Remove the tower

Level the horizon.

Add some vignetting to draw the focus to the center of the image.

I have another picture where the yellow squiggles are perfectly in focus. I could paste them in I suppose.

Vignetting sounds interesting! Just google'd it now to know what it was.

Thanks

I thinks its good nice colours if a little wonky as already pointed out!