Old pic, new PP, CC pls

Photos taken 6 months ago, No 1 PP back then, second one is new.
Pls CC so i can keep getting better

It is definitely better.....

new one is head and shoulders above the other. good work!

Thank you very much for the CC

#2 is SOOO much better, PP in #1 doesn't work for me at all

#2 is definitely an improvement over #1, but just curious what does the original look like?

Watson, original can be seen here
https://photography-on-the.net …read.php?t=8803​73&page=36

I like your crop choice in #2 but would be much more subtle in popping the skin tones. It all depends on your intent.

#1 cant even be considered a photograph.

#2 looks like a photograph but i think its still wayyy over processed.

AZ and One, thanks
Yes I think is a llitle over PP, I realiced that after I post it and looked at it 100 times.
I am on vacations until next week with a small netbook, so i cannt work on it now, but next week will try to get the skin a little less PP in colors, and cleaned a little.
But I really like it, and she loves it better....

new PP with erros corrected