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Jan 07, 2011 05:28 | #1

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still learning with my 550d as well as some adobe. none of these i would like to call great but more like a start.

anyways would like some thoughts and constructive criticism, mindful these are just some practice and nothing real official and great to me.

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Jan 07, 2011 06:27 | #2

The first I would say is an attempt

The second...well, I am not real sure what the intent was here (draining oil?).

The third...I just cant think of anything to say.

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Jan 07, 2011 19:10 | #3

#1 was interesting. I think it could be improved if there was only one bullet laying on its side. A rule of composition says that when shooting objects that are the center of interest, compose using an odd number of objects.

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Jan 07, 2011 19:12 | #4

I'm biased towards firearms so I like the ammunition shot. The one thing I would do to improve that, IMHO, is to focus on the bullets lying down and not on the primers of those beneath.

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Jan 07, 2011 21:18 | #5

Wow, #1 has a lot of potential. Love the rich colors. Very creative. #2 ... Meh. #3 Just sort of a shapshot, I guess.

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