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Jan 08, 2011 06:58 |  #1

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Jan 08, 2011 08:56 |  #2

Straighten the horizon...



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Jan 08, 2011 10:20 |  #3

I will go back and look at it but from right to left the ground is higher going to the lower water... Checking not for sure.


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Jan 08, 2011 10:53 |  #4

SYS wrote in post #11597870 (external link)
Straighten the horizon...

i don't get why everyone is stressing over this, the picture looks fine


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Jan 08, 2011 11:01 |  #5

Nice shot, I think the horizon is fine. The right area is higher its so obviously clear, you can not see the rest of the beach going to the right... so its perfect! I love the colors in this, but not the car... why?? Cause I dont have one like that! :D

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Jan 08, 2011 11:33 |  #6

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i don't get why everyone is stressing over this, the picture looks fine

What "everyone" and what "stressing" are you talking about? If you like the way it is, fine, just say so like the other member.



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Jan 08, 2011 11:43 as a reply to  @ SYS's post |  #7

It would be nice to see it with the horizon straightened out a bit. Can you do that and repost it? Then the class can look at both of them and decide which is best.




  
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Jan 08, 2011 12:04 |  #8

Albertonman wrote in post #11598459 (external link)
Nice shot, I think the horizon is fine.

The horizon is tilted.

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Jan 08, 2011 12:17 |  #9

not a big fan of the border (would rather see a 2-3px black line, not this rounded LR3 border).. also my nitpicky attention was drawn to the major difference between the front rim and the back.

Lovely shot all in all.




  
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Jan 08, 2011 12:41 |  #10

The ocean is a big hole, I think the horizon is fine.


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Jan 08, 2011 15:57 as a reply to  @ TomCross13's post |  #11

Wasn't stressing I was going to check it out :)


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Jan 08, 2011 16:08 |  #12

TomCross13 wrote in post #11598939 (external link)
The ocean is a big hole, I think the horizon is fine.

Assuming that tilted is fine. :D


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Jan 08, 2011 16:10 |  #13

A little oversaturated for my tastes, but the composition is great. Nice location too!


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Jan 08, 2011 19:48 |  #14

Very cool!




  
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Jan 09, 2011 05:00 |  #15

I agree with the horizon thing, it puts me off. But otherwise I really dig it, good work.


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