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Jan 08, 2011 15:40 |  #1

I liked how the morning sun breaking through the clouds warmed up this farm.

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Jan 08, 2011 15:48 |  #2

The image is alright, would have been better if you went wider though. On the pp side, its a bit over saturated for my liking and the plantation seems a bit neon?




  
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Jan 08, 2011 16:06 as a reply to  @ Albertonman's post |  #3

I like the subjects, but the over saturation seems to have left this one looking slightly OOF to me? Hills look great.


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Jan 08, 2011 16:11 |  #4

I like the composotion but the blue coming from the clouds looks a bit over done.


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Jan 08, 2011 16:17 |  #5

nice comp but I think the colors are a bit overdone... did you HDR this?


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Jan 08, 2011 16:18 as a reply to  @ Milutiche's post |  #6

Thanks for the comments so far. I've been 'playing' with some different filters and like the details in the mountains that was brought out and the warm colors, especially around the hay shed but was unsure about the saturation. I'll try doing some selective desaturation.

Edit: yes, this is a 7 exposure hdr and heavily cropped.


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Jan 08, 2011 17:28 as a reply to  @ navydoc's post |  #7

Ok, the heavy crop would explain the softness...


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Jan 08, 2011 19:46 as a reply to  @ Flo's post |  #8

Here's a more conservative edit and less cropped. The scene was dark due to the clouds with the sun popping through which lit things up a bit.


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Jan 08, 2011 20:30 as a reply to  @ navydoc's post |  #9

I like the last one posted with maybe a compromise between the two on the saturation although a large print of the last one would work really well.


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Jan 08, 2011 20:47 |  #10

he second one os better but need to balance the saturation a lil bit because the soil area is a lil bit dull.. try to play with the vibrance to achieve the effect.. just try


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Jan 09, 2011 09:26 |  #11

We are all different ... I tend to like the saturated shot better. I think you nailed it!


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Jan 09, 2011 16:27 |  #12

i like a little bit of extra saturation as well but the first one the clould seem unnatually blue. so if u could tone down the satuation alittle on the sky it would improve the shot. But otherwise i like the shot very much personally.


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Jan 09, 2011 18:10 as a reply to  @ Hoiber's post |  #13

Thanks for the additional suggestions...much appreciated.


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