I was going to comment then read all the bickering and thought perhaps not, but since the OP is re-shooting I do have some comments to offer. Hopefully they will be useful 
Overall I think the shots were well executed. Great job getting separation from the black background and nice reflection achieved. I don't see any apparent noise but my MacBook is not calibrated and I'm not running to the loft to check on the 27".
I personally don't see any need to increase the DOF in the re-shoot, rather I'd open up to f8 and drop to ISO 800 with a shutter speed that gives you the exposure you want. I'd also shoot in manual and not rely on Av, adjusting the shutter accordingly.
The main thing I'd concentrate on is controlling the light reflecting off the front elements, especially the 2nd & 3rd shots. The colours are great, but the white reflections are distracting and really hold the shots back from being ad/catalog quality. A CP filter might help reduce overall reflection but I doubt it will do much to reduce the white reflection. Play around with height & angle of the lamps, and lens position, to see if you can get a camera angle where the lamps aren't reflecting on the element. You can also try flagging to block the light source causing the reflection. Another way might be to light from the back corners and use a reflector to bounce light onto the front. You can move the reflector until you get a reflection that works for you.
Good luck. I look forward to results of the re-shoot.