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Jan 12, 2011 20:45 |  #1

After a few weeks of pestering me to go with him, my boyfriend finally convinced me to go. Tell me what you think, this is my first time :)

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Jan 12, 2011 21:27 |  #2

I like them all! The first two are probably my favorites. #1 the composition, the balance, the repeating lamp posts and benches; the world in grays, greens, and white. #2 the contrast between the color and precise shape of the human-made tank and the brown and randomness of the tree. The rest are appealing too, and I think that sycamore tree is in my back yard. :)


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Jan 12, 2011 22:11 |  #3

Nice photos..The fire hydrant was my fav..


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Jan 12, 2011 22:20 |  #4

I think CnC would be helpful from other people.

Very good for your first time!


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Jan 12, 2011 22:41 |  #5

They all look nice to me. I like the lamp posts.


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Jan 12, 2011 22:44 |  #6

You may have outdone the boyfriend. Nice job. The first one strikes me as a well thought out composition with straight lines and tall vertical energy.


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Jan 12, 2011 22:46 |  #7

Thanks for the comments all, can anyone share any criticisms too? :lol:




  
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Jan 12, 2011 22:53 |  #8

Ed Harp wrote in post #11629389 (external link)
You may have outdone the boyfriend. Nice job. The first one strikes me as a well thought out composition with straight lines and tall vertical energy.

:rolleyes::lol:


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Jan 12, 2011 23:15 |  #9

Personally, I think #1 would look better in BW

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Jan 12, 2011 23:45 |  #10

kaptnkain wrote in post #11629557 (external link)
Personally, I think #1 would look better in BW

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i was actually thinking the same thing




  
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Jan 12, 2011 23:52 |  #11

Including the photographer or some person in first photograph wouuld have made it even better. Benches are inviting to laze around.

Grass with water droplets - lovely -- front line of grass, which is not in focus is distracting a bit -- how come there is no water on RHS grass


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Jan 13, 2011 12:31 |  #12

Personally like the last one the best but I'm a sucker for silhouettes


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Jan 13, 2011 14:55 |  #13

ssmanak wrote in post #11629720 (external link)
Including the photographer or some person in first photograph wouuld have made it even better. Benches are inviting to laze around.

Grass with water droplets - lovely -- front line of grass, which is not in focus is distracting a bit -- how come there is no water on RHS grass

thanks for the advice.
And i don't know why. I just noticed that it was the only spot with water in the middle of this big section of grass, so i took a picture of it. I thought it was interesting




  
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