Trying different long exposure

Interesting bridge/overpass thingie. I find that your horizon is crooked. That alone would help this a lot. However, I still feel the image is missing something. Maybe a lack of a clearly defined subject that can hold a viewer's interest.

For that reason, no. 1 is way better than no. 2 because of the almost complete lack of detail in the foreground of the second.

i will try rotating and getting it straight.
So you think if i would have maybe had a car, or a person in the foreground it would look better

thanks for you input

koolcreation wrote in post #11634518
i will try rotating and getting it straight.
So you think if i would have maybe had a car, or a person in the foreground it would look better

thanks for you input

I personally think so. Anything that could be a subject of interest would be better than the large triangle of dark pavement. I also think a brighter exposure on the pavement--like in shot 1--helps create dynamics in the image with the road paint being visible.

Agree, with post above about straightening the photo. 2nd one is the keeper in my opinion.

edit one is very nice! good shot!