Melissa C&C Welcome

Had a chance to do a quick shoot this past weekend. C&C is welcome and appreciated

(I know the focus was missed in the second shot >< unfortunately, it was also one of my favorites that she took so bar that c&c on lighting, composition, etc. would help )

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she's purty Nicely done, good light on the eyes, really sharp. Don't like how you lopped off the top of her head in #1 though

First is adorable..the crop look s fine to me...

The second not so pleasing as the shadow from her nose is quite prominent?

I don't mind the cropped head at all, but it puts the head at a funny perspective (??) relative to her long torso. I'm not sure if I said that correctly, but I'm picturing the same crop at the top, with much less of her body showing and in my mind's eye, I like it better. Stunning beauty she is, and I think that having more of an emphasis on her face might be nice. Still, there is nice, even lighting, her hair is shining, great light and catchlights in her eyes. nice work.