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Jan 15, 2011 19:55 |  #1

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I think that I did a better job getting the Bee in focus on this one. Input appreciated as always.
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What do you think of the 2nd photo?

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Jan 15, 2011 20:46 |  #2

I like both photos. I thing the bee is a little close the center, however there is good balance in the arrangement of sedum. The out of focus areas reveal some noise in the first one. the 2nd one has less noise. I like the slightly off-center yellow flower.
Honestly, I had a real hard time to think of anything negative to say about these. Good Job.


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Jan 16, 2011 00:39 |  #3

The first image is definitely stronger, although I would definitely consider shooting a little tighter if possible. However, GREAT job capturing the bee, I know bug photography can be quite a challenge!

I don't particularly care for the second image. The background looks kinda gross and clashes a bit with the flower which doesn't really have an separation or contrast in it to make it a compelling subject.




  
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Jan 16, 2011 00:53 |  #4

Ed Harp wrote in post #11649020 (external link)
I like both photos. I thing the bee is a little close the center, however there is good balance in the arrangement of sedum. The out of focus areas reveal some noise in the first one. the 2nd one has less noise. I like the slightly off-center yellow flower.
Honestly, I had a real hard time to think of anything negative to say about these. Good Job.

I didn't notice the noise until after mentioned it. I did a little post processing that may have contributed to that. I really appreciate a little positive feedback to go with the CC. :D
I know that I have a lot to learn and this forum is really helping me to improve.


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Jan 16, 2011 01:02 |  #5

SavantDeviance wrote in post #11650131 (external link)
The first image is definitely stronger, although I would definitely consider shooting a little tighter if possible. However, GREAT job capturing the bee, I know bug photography can be quite a challenge!

I don't particularly care for the second image. The background looks kinda gross and clashes a bit with the flower which doesn't really have an separation or contrast in it to make it a compelling subject.

Yes the Bee was really hard to capture. Every time I was ready to take a shot it would take off. This made it really hard to focus on the Bee. I really appreciate your feedback but the gross background is leaves from the flowers. A natural background that blurred as it should while keeping the flower sharper. No where near as good as it could be I know. I will get better with all the great CC I'm getting here. :)


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Jan 16, 2011 09:32 |  #6

Love the Bee shot, Love Bees... I've taken many Bee shot's myself and could tell you, not easy... but a few things I've learned that makes it easier and works every time for me, is :

tripod, a remote shutter release and pre-focus on the flower, and just wait for the Bee...
Pre-Focusing is a great way of getting your shot, after you pre-focus, set your lens on manual.


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Jan 16, 2011 10:30 |  #7

First one is probably the best of your work to date that I've had the pleasure of viewing.


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Jan 16, 2011 13:10 |  #8

HazYleaF wrote in post #11651484 (external link)
Love the Bee shot, Love Bees... I've taken many Bee shot's myself and could tell you, not easy... but a few things I've learned that makes it easier and works every time for me, is :

tripod, a remote shutter release and pre-focus on the flower, and just wait for the Bee...
Pre-Focusing is a great way of getting your shot, after you pre-focus, set your lens on manual.

Thanks for your input. I do have a tripod and will have to put it to more use next Summer. I don't have a remote shutter release yet but hope to get one in the near future. I've been reading about pre focusing in my book and I'll use what I've learned to capture better focused shots when I get the chance.


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Jan 16, 2011 13:15 |  #9

corkneyfonz wrote in post #11651790 (external link)
First one is probably the best of your work to date that I've had the pleasure of viewing.

Thanks for letting me know that. This is one of my favorites too.
I think I did ok in capturing the Bee and the bright pink of the flowers. I can only improve with the great CC I'm getting from this forum.


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Jan 16, 2011 13:26 |  #10

really like the first one... good capture...


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Jan 16, 2011 14:32 |  #11

focus.pocus wrote in post #11652795 (external link)
really like the first one... good capture...

I probably took about 30 shots and ended up with 1 or 2 with good quality. I'll use a tripod next time. :lol:


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