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HI people im new on this forum just wanting to start asking for professional help so i know where im going wrong and so on

my 1st panoramic ever please let me know what you guys think about it thanks

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It is good work .
try some better comosition becouse central composition is mono.
you can do some change to sky and make it much dramatic and do some vignette.

darence wrote in post #11653586
It is good work .
try some better comosition becouse central composition is mono.
you can do some change to sky and make it much dramatic and do some vignette.

Um, bad. Vignetting is something people want to get rid of, not add. I like it, However I would like to see a color version.

yep, let's see color...

Hot Cocoa wrote in post #11653623
Um, bad. Vignetting is something people want to get rid of, not add.

That's the dumbest thing I've read so far today! People add vignetting to photos all the time. It can suit a style perfectly sometimes.

OP. The panoramic here works well and the print tone is excellent. A good start to a technique that is likely going to be a long term part of your imaging toolkit.

MrGreen wrote in post #11658841
That's the dumbest thing I've read so far today! People add vignetting to photos all the time. It can suit a style perfectly sometimes. .

If that's the case then why is vignetting featured in both Lens Correction and Effects in Lightroom3 ??

jetcode wrote in post #11658971
OP. The panoramic here works well and the print tone is excellent. A good start to a technique that is likely going to be a long term part of your imaging toolkit.

If that's the case then why is vignetting featured in both Lens Correction and Effects in Lightroom3 ??

Thank you. I find it to be something inexperienced photographers use to make it look "cooler". A real Photographer will say, lens problem, unless it is clear that it is intended, in this picture I would say Lens problem...

Personally I don't think it needs any vignetting. But that's just me. There are many times vignetting can help a picture, but personally my eye jumps right to the center immediately. I too would like to see the color version. But the B&W looks nice!

thanks guy ill have to re stitch and so on cause i only did it in b/w cause colour didn't do it for me .. but ill re do it in colour .. thanks for the feedback I'm just a beginner still starting off and would like to make it my career one day

IMO vignetting is less effective in a panoramic than it is in a square or near square format such as 6x6, 6x7, 4x5, even 2x3.

Waffles101 wrote in post #11661015
thanks guy ill have to re stitch and so on cause i only did it in b/w cause colour didn't do it for me .. but ill re do it in colour .. thanks for the feedback I'm just a beginner still starting off and would like to make it my career one day

Stitch in color convert to b/w ... IMO better control over b/w interpretation.

Waffles welcome to POTN. We are glad that you have decided to join us.
The photo you posted is rather nice. As mentioned before you might utilize the Rule of Thirds to improve the composition. Nice job. Please continue to share and ask questions.

Now for the name calling and poor choice of language I would like to remind you that the atmosphere at POTN is better than that. While healthy debate is good, there is no place or cursing or name calling here. I have cleaned up some of the post, put away the broom and don't want to get it back out please.