I like this shot,but I know something can be better. Share your knowledge.
yellowstone Member 140 posts Joined Dec 2010 More info | Jan 20, 2011 05:23 | #2 Is that an asr?
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capri_stylee Member 220 posts Joined Oct 2010 Location: Belfast, Ireland More info | Jan 20, 2011 07:24 | #3 The whites could be a bit brighter imo, still a nice shot though...
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DigitalSpecialist Goldmember 2,286 posts Likes: 1 Joined May 2008 Location: Finding a New World, thru my camera More info | Jan 20, 2011 08:03 | #4 Try a different angle? I would like to see more of the keys in the photo. Also, you might try getting really close to the keys. Maybe shoot a single key with a shallow depth of field? I do like this photo because it has solid bases in lighting and composition. JIM
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corkneyfonz Goldmember 2,477 posts Likes: 5 Joined Oct 2009 Location: United Kingdom More info | Jan 20, 2011 11:14 | #5 What rather spoils it for me is the natural lighting which gives the impression that the black keys are in serious need of some dusting.
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martkal44 Member 245 posts Joined Aug 2010 Location: Stoke-on-Trent, UK More info | Jan 20, 2011 11:23 | #6 Try it in b&w. Or get the colours popping more, like the whites. iTunes Series CodEye - CodEye
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RossMurray Member 220 posts Likes: 2 Joined Nov 2010 Location: Scotland More info | Jan 20, 2011 15:30 | #7 Maybe try a long exposure with someone playing it? Just spitballing here, I rather like it as is. Camera: Canon EOS 1D MkII
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Jan 21, 2011 05:16 | #8 Thanks for all the inputs. I think I will do a retake in the future. @ Capri,I do think The white on the keys should be a lil brighter. Might have to over expose a little. There is nothing worse than a brilliant image of a fuzzy concept. - Ansel Adams
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bailey239 Member 143 posts Joined Dec 2010 Location: South Florida More info | Jan 21, 2011 05:47 | #9 Also maybe try to focus 3/4 of the way through the pic instead of right in the front of the pic. that may help draw your eye's into to the pic... just a thought ~Josh~
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